notice I typed (Yamazaki Susumu + Okita)
not
Yamazaki X Okita
(too bad yaoi fans!)
this is a serious drama doujinshi rated - R for graphic violence
I didn't translate to the part where there is serious violence yet I stopped
on page 11 and will finish later
the art is beautiful and yes there are other Shinsengumi (though not
labelled---we just need a list of names of guys who went with Okita to
recruit in Osaka---off the top of my head I know Saitou Hijikata and Itou
did travel to recruit in Osaka--you see them in this manga all shivering in
their blankets...)
The zip file will explain where this story came from just read the "Info" file
I also explain why I can't figure out the orginal Japanese title for it
I had to color each speaking part
Yamazaki Susumu (blue)
Okita (orange)
baddies (red)
extras (black)
and there are supporting charas of the girl and her mother
if someone has seen this doujinshi translated already please let me know
so I can stop (it is stime consuming because I have to sit there and erase
the words with photo shop) ... tiring!...
oh and incidentally...many of us know of how Okita has a "flat fish face"
and we don't know what that means...
this is a (possible) explanation
this story tells that Okita's ***favorite food is
"rice with eel face" (literal translation)
or
"eel over rice" (smooth translation)
perhaps that association of "fish" and "face" got corrupted and became a
description of him? I dunno...but it is in the Thai
https://mywebspace.wisc.edu/tnamwong/web/WhenTheFogClears1-11.zip