Hi, everyone!
I've just posted Chapter 7 of "Three," a lemon featuring a threesome between
Kenshin, Kaoru, and Saitou:
http://adultfan.nexcess.net/aff/story.php?no=544174017&chapter=7
I'm always trying to improve my writing (and right now, and focusing heavily
on characterization); any suggestions for improvement that you might have
would be greatly appreciated.
Thanks, and best wishes for 2005!
Kalli