Thanks to Tiffany, I finished Chapter One. I'm not entirely happy
with it, but I felt like I needed to get it out so I can move on to
the meat of the story. Hopefully I can pick up the pace and begin
writing more regularly.
Rather than taking up additional space on the list site and crowding
others' inboxes, I've simply uploaded it into the Files section,
which is what I'll probably be doing with all my stories. If ff.net
is working, it'll be available there, too... maybe... hopefully...
some time... (accessible through
http://www.fanfiction.net/~philalexandros)
Comments always welcome, good or bad, publically or privately.
Hopefully this link will work...
http://f5.grp.yahoofs.com/v1/ABOOQA2EB07Bdpr_4C19hvKwMTbuLIEsGQWgh2J8R
aEtETe3u50i_nmLH3m4MH8bjcIlXe_r5yqQkkUbxgl0Qw/Archive%20of%
20Stories/Yasou/Yasou%20-%20Chapter%20One.htm
phil